Storm #1 pg 16 by David Yardin

Pencils by , inks by   Brush, India ink, and mixed media on Bristol board. 2007-2016.

I took another shot at one of David's pages. I tried loosening up my strokes, and the lines seemed to flow better. 

I was happy to have the opportunity to use some dry brush techniques, which I had a lot of fun with. I tried to work on properly separating the foreground, middle ground, and background in each panel, which is a weakness of mine that many pros have pointed out. 

I'm doing the next page in the sequence and will probably do a third, just to round it out. I'll also post a pencil/ink comparison page, once my Photoshop stops crashing.